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Kim'Jael

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PostSubject: Blood n' hate. (same story on GoD forum)   Thu 08 May 2008, 18:10

The hatred and the blood.

Kim'jael stood in the shadow's behind
the tree, he was invisible he was one with the shadow.
He looked over at his pray... his eyes
scanned the two humans sitting there having a pick nick.
He watched from the shadow... he saw as
the two deskusting humans sat there... drinking, laughing.
Kim'jael saw the two of them... he
hated it... them and all there race...

he felt the anger grow within him... he
sat down on his knees, in his head he herd the screams of thousands
of High elf's screaming for revenge on the Humans who betrayed them!
They burned Kim'jael from inside he
felt the blood lust grow from within... he whanted to kill them...
kill the traitors... it's all there fault!


Kim'jael charged out of the shadow's
screaming... Blood lust filled him.
he ignored the smarter strategy of
attacking from the shadows. He was to angry... to blood hungry.
The woman saw the young elf charging...
He screamed. The male saw him coming... and the male looked to his
backpack and tried to draw some thing from it but as he moved his
face towards the attacker... he's vison was clouded buy a foot coming
in grate speed. The male fell back and got knocked out...


the Female screamed and bottle in hand
she attacked the Elf bandit. the bottle came towards Kim'jael, but he
did a parry with his dagger witch resulted with the bottle braking
and the glass spreading over them both... Kim'jael only got some
small paces on his armour... but the female got it over her face...
but none in her eye's.
She swigged the broken bottle towards
him and Kim'jael foolishly covered him self with his arm.

his armour and skin was penetrated,
Kim'jael screamed in pain... as the blood starts to por out of his
open wound he feel as hatred started to swell even more. He stabbed
the woman in the eye, as she screamed out in pain, she held her hands
over her eye to try to cover it up.
Kim moved behind her and attacked with
both his blades in the same time at her waist.
the female let out a small noise and
then well to the ground... her blood escaped her broken body and it
covered the ground around her. Kim'jael watched the bloody mutilated
body of the human...

behind him he herd a how of pain and
sorrow.

Kim'jael looked behind him but he
wasent quick enough so he punched to the ground buy the enraged male.
Kim'jael looked up and saw the face of the male... his eyes where
filed with hate and anger, he started to beat the small elf.
Kim'jael reserved many blows to his
face and torso even though he parryd some of the humans attacks.
Then Kim'jael lifted his torso and slit
the man's throat with his dagger the blood splated over Kim'jael. The
man stood up... and so did Kim'jael but the elf jumped behind the
human then stabed the humans waist with both his blade's... twise.
The man fell to the ground, the man pulled the female close to him
and hugged her, the two bloody and broken corpses lay there on the
ground to geather...


Kim'jael put a bandage over his
wound... he looked in there bag and found some bottles and a note and
a book and some gold coins and two very sharp blades that where every
beautiful
He looked at the two humans, the male
hugging the female... the both of them, slaughtered.
Kim'jael looked in there pockets and he
found a neddel and a thread in the females pocket.
The male carried two golden rings...

- Prisey... Kim'jael seed to him
self smiling.

Then he felt the bruses on his face and
torso and he made a small scream out of pain.
he steeped back in to the Shadow and
stood there to catch his bearth.
He looked at his bloody armour and his
wounded arm...

The elf stood there in the shadow and
felt the power returning to him so he desided that he was sick of the
human forest and wanted to go home... becorse he felt... good.
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PostSubject: Re: Blood n' hate. (same story on GoD forum)   Sun 08 Jun 2008, 02:14

I hadn't read this before, but it's really good Smile Kim certainly has different aspects to his personality which is great as they don't flip between each other like an on/off switch - he actually feels like a real person. That's a talent alot of rpers don't have.
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PostSubject: Re: Blood n' hate. (same story on GoD forum)   Sun 08 Jun 2008, 08:27

Uddersbane wrote:
I hadn't read this before, but it's really good Smile Kim certainly has different aspects to his personality which is great as they don't flip between each other like an on/off switch - he actually feels like a real person. That's a talent alot of rpers don't have.

Thank you Udd! Very Happy!^^
Kim Happy! Very Happy!
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PostSubject: Re: Blood n' hate. (same story on GoD forum)   Sun 08 Jun 2008, 21:52

Wow, Kim can be pretty brutal... Nice story!
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PostSubject: Re: Blood n' hate. (same story on GoD forum)   Mon 09 Jun 2008, 13:38

Andromus wrote:
Wow, Kim can be pretty brutal... Nice story!

Why thank you Very Happy
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