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PostSubject: The Bloodmores   Fri 18 Jan 2008, 23:43

( well this weekend im at my dads place... and my little brother have f***ed around with my pc...long story short wow aint on my pc and i dont got the discs with me. so i decided share Moradors Family history with ya all. This also tells ya a little about morador as a young kid.)

Bloodmore... Never have the world seen such a blade before...
It all began with Zerador Bloodmore a young and skilled mage.
The Bloodmore was Zeradorīs first and last sword.
His dream was to create a sword worthy of a god.
But in the end all Bloodmore were was a fancy piece of steel.
So Zerador went out on journey that lasted for many of years.

When he finally returned to his home he had collected countless of forbidden and forgotten enchantments and with the aid of his 6 brothers...
He succeeded... The Bloodmore was no longer a weapon...
It was a miracle...But ones Zerador held up the blade he said to his brothers that they most hide the blade.
Zeradorīs brothers didnīt understand.

He had spent so much time creating the blade and now he wanted to hide it? Zerador explained that he wanted to create a great pure blade...
And that what he had done... Bloodmore a Sword with the power of a god... Pure light.... If the Bloodmore would ever be soiled with blood it would no longer be a miracle just another tool of destruction.

Zeradorīs brothers understood and took the blade where no one would ever find it....And ever sens then The first born of every generation of Bloodmoreīs. Will be given the honor to not only know the location of the blade...But also to see and tuch it... But we most never use Bloodmore.
That would be a betray of my grand fatherīs will. We Bloodmore have sworn to protect the blade with our lives...

So kids did that answer your question? Said Dormir.
That was awsome! Zephon screamed.
Ah come on Dad... Do you really expect us to belive all that?
Morador asked with a sceptic tone.
Dormir nodded. Indeed its all true...
Please... If there was any sword like that why not use it?

There were a time when i thought like you to Morador...
But our family made a promise to all ways protect and never use the blade... And dont forget that we are Bloodmores beaking a promise is not a option...
Dormir looked at his son with a little diseappointment in his eyes...
Morador was a young adult now...The time is closeing in when its his turn to see the blade and he still dident understand what it means to be a Bloodmore.

Remember Morador nothing is more sacret to us Bloodmores then...
Yeah yeah i know... Honor and loalty... I heard it thousands of times before i get it! Morador said in frustration.
Im telling you this becuse you dont get it! You think you get it which isnīt the same a getting it! Dormir got sick of Moradorīs attitude and told him to learn the meaning of honor.

Morador was still young and lacked experience and common manners.
Still he was a young Bloodknight prodigy wich made his father proud.
years past and after a long time Dormir finally thought Morador was whorty of seeing the Bloodmore...

As only morador and his 3 brothers are left of the Bloodmores. Morador is the last in his family who knows where the Bloodmore is being held.

(this is my 3th story plz comment and place suggestion to help future storys)


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PostSubject: Re: The Bloodmores   Fri 18 Jan 2008, 23:54

Hi Mora, i ddin't have time to study your story a lot right now, although I noticed a mistake that I wanted to point out to avoid embaressment to you. Smile

High Elves only live for about 400 years.
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PostSubject: Re: The Bloodmores   Fri 18 Jan 2008, 23:55

realy well!? iīll fix that wile im at the spell cheacking. i havent ever heard of the normal lifespan of a elf so sorry ^^.Alot of ppl here are aperently over 3000 years old so i got confused but im gona take your word for it.
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PostSubject: Re: The Bloodmores   Sat 19 Jan 2008, 01:35

Well, I take that info from the table-top RP books, there's a sticky about it in the "RP discussions and tips" forums.
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